Thursday, February 18, 2010

Correspondance

So today's entry is going to be a little different from usual. Before everything gets lost in the shuffle of cranking out words, and arranging things for Script Frenzy, I want... No, need, to pass on a bit of correspondance that I've been having with the folks down at The Office of Letters and Light. On Feb 16th, "Tim", and intern for the director of Script Frenzy sent out a notice to all MLs asking for people to nominate someone from our region to be featured on the site in something similar to the WriMo report from the NaNoWriMo website. We just had to provide a short summary of their general awesomeness, and let it go at that.

I thought long and hard, as there are so many people in the Sudbury region that I believe are deserving of 15-minutes of fame. In the end, I chose my official unofficial co-ML, and sent this off (18 hours ago):

Hello Tim!

You asked if there was anyone whose awesomeness would be great to showcase. As much as I would love to put myself up for dibs, I'm not nearly as awesome as my unofficial Co-ML, so I'm going to tell you all about her, and what makes her awesome.

Julia Muldoon (username PiscesMuse) signed on this year to the Frenzy for the first time, still hot on the heels of Sudbury's greated NaNoWriMo to date. She's come up with a tonne of ideas for us this year, and has been spearheading the organizing of an overnight write-in at Laurentian University, similar to the outstanding one we had for NaNo which yielded 18 unique participants and saw most of us crash through the 50k word mark. With her energy, I'm certain we'll be seeing a nice chunk of participants for this year's "From Dusk Til Dawn" event. Julia has also been brainstorming Sudbury's version of a Scripter's PDA, has done a lot of the running around to get event locations and themes hammered out, and other general energetic madness. She's been doing all of this, but without being able to take the official title of Co-ML as it will be her first Frenzy.

Julia also plans on working on a musical for this year's SF. With her background in theater and love of musicals, I know it'll be a blast and that in all likelihood, we may even end up hearing a couple of songs performed!

If I could think of anyone to feature, it would definitely be Julia. She's a great candidate.


About an hour ago, I received a reply from Tim:

Hi Shawn!

That's so great! Thank you so much for taking the time out to nominate Julia, it's much appreciated. And hey, nothing wrong with self-nominating! We'd love to feature you, too!

Oh man, it does sound like Julia's doing some pretty awesome stuff up there in Sudbury, especially in such an unofficial capacity. We'll definitely do our best to tip our hats to her.

Thank you again, and, actually, if we could feature you, too, that'd be great! Do you mind sending me a little bit of info about yourself? Hope to hear from you soon.


At first, I didn't want to reply. I mean, as much as I sometimes love to blow my own horn, I don't like bragging or taking all the credit when it isn't due. But inevitably, I gave in because it was requested, and wrote the following:

Hey Tim.

I guess I could send some information about myself, though I don't feel nearly as qualified to talk about myself in as glowing terms as I can talk about everything Julia's been doing for the area. I think it's still an inspiring story, and something I have the Office of Letters and Light to truly thank for it.

I first picked up on NaNo back in 2004 (though I forgot my original password by 2005 and had to create a fresh account) as a suggestion from my poetry workshop classmates while I was in the midst of getting my degree in English at Carleton University in Ottawa, Ontario, Canada. I had more or less given up on writing short stories and novels up until the event and it set me back on course.

By 2006 I had moved up to North Bay, and got involved with the much smaller NaNo group up there. At first, there were no events planned, so I proposed a handful on the group forums, and we all met up on campus at Nipissing University, where I was getting my Bachelor of Education with a focus on multimedia technology. Unfortunately, the last half of the month I was up in Timmins on my placement, so was unable to do any guiding of events.

When Script Frenzy launched in June 2007, I was all over it. I was excited, and I was alone. As much as I wanted to get something out of it, it's a lot harder to keep yourself going without a group of people checking up on you to make sure you succeed. I missed the activity, and the comraderie that I had found in Ottawa during the first years of NaNo, or in North Bay where I was helping to get things going. In 2008, I put up some flyers around Timmins, but there was little interest in writing.

By Fall 2008, I was in Sudbury, Ontario, Canada. I figured it being a bit of a larger city, it had to have a good writing base. With no ML in sight for NaNo, I hastily applied just before the deadline. We had a great turnout, and for the first time beat North Bay in word count. I signed on as ML of SF in 2009, but was disappointed by the turnout. The same light advertising that I had done for my first NaNo as ML was a total flop for SF.

So for NaNo 2009, I got some advertising for both NaNo and SF out at the Northern Lights Festival, where I was sharing a booth with the Sudbury Writers Guild and the Sudbury Hypergraphic Society. As November approached, I got with a few of the previous year's veterans, and we came up with some plans. Advertisements went up, we got a cease and desist order that I had to rectify with the city, but our goal was achieved. And with the help of some of those veterans (Sylvie / sinful_cinnamon especially) and a couple of new people (chiefly Julia / PiscesMuse ), it was a huge year with overnight write-ins, launch parties, TGIO party, and a dozen write-ins at a half-dozen different locations.

The thrill of arranging and seeing these events go off were truly inspiring for me, and despite all the work involved, I loved every minute of it. It gave me a hope to get out of my dead-end job and maybe do something with my degrees. So I applied for school, again. And I got in to my program. The program? Event Management at Algonquin College in Ottawa. I loved organizing events so much, that I figure I may as well do it for a living.

Even before receiving my acceptance notice, I was looking for people that I thought could work together to keep NaNo, and Script Frenzy, going and growing. I found Sylvie for the one, as she was instrumental this past year, and I found Julia for the other. I've taken all I've learned from NaNo and SF, and I'm passing it along to them as we get the ball rolling and events organized for this year's SF. We're going all out on the advertising, getting the events organized, and ensuring we have good locations (even on April Fools).

In the end, I'm sure this year's SF will be just as fantastic as this past year's NaNo, and I hope to have the photos to prove it. If Ottawa is still vacant for an ML for next year's SF, I hope to fill that spot and give the city a heck of an event to match the ones that set me onto this trek way back in 2004.

So you see Tim, it's not me that's done anything particularly awesome, its the OLL that deserves the recognition and the spotlight. Without the OLL, I never would have figured out what to do for my future, with schools closing left and right up here, my old goal to be a teacher would remain unrealized, and I'd continue to be stuck where I was: selling electronics most people don't really need. Instead, the events headed by the OLL have given me a direction, and I'm just happy to give back as much as I'm able, when I'm able.

Send my thanks to Chris, Lindsay, and everyone else up there at the OLL. You all do a bang-up job every year, and I'm thrilled to be a part of it in my own way.


I'm going to be borrowing a part of that letter and using it as my future bio, because I think I've done a bang-up job of describing what I've been up to
the past few years, and I've done it without bragging. The letter does give my true and honest opinion of everything that's been happening over the past few years, and gives thanks where it's due. I know there are a couple of people out there that are doubtful, concerned, or just plain confused about why I chose to apply for another program, and I hope that this answers those doubts and sways people the way that I feel. Quite honestly, my greatest fear is that this last letter was probably the greatest piece of writing I've done to date.

Back on to writing, I finished up outlining Blackfoot this morning. Turns out I'm writing a novella, not a short story. It also turns out that it's a modern fantasy, as opposed to a dark fantasy. Surprises all around! Time to get off and do some writing, the opening needs to be retooled to fit the story's new structure and goals, and I hope to crank out a few thousand words before tonight's write-in.

Keep on writing!

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Sunday, February 7, 2010

Hitting a Wall

So I'm stuck. Like most writers out there, eventually we do hit walls. There's all sorts of advice on how to blaze past it, and I've shoved my way through a great many of them in the past, but it's here none the less. I had been working hard to hammer out the first chapter of a YA novel. I struggled immensely, managed a little over 1000 words in about a month, and decided that it just wasn't going to work out. Or atleast, that idea wasn't going to work out.

I came home from the Monday Night Writer's Pack, and cranked out about 800 words of a different piece. Mostly random, no real plot or ideas, just playing around a bit. It sounded alright, and over the past week, I've more than doubled the number of words. Catch is, it was just a kind of exercise and I've no clue where I want to go with it, if anywhere. I may have the kernals of something, but they haven't popped yet.

To make matters worse, I had a deadline this past Thursday to submit a piece for critiquing with the Underground Writers, and there's one today with the Monday Night Writing Pack that I'm going to be missing. I'm going to have to send an apology in lieu of submission to both I'm afraid. The piece I sunk a month into isn't fit for human eyes, and the one I started last week, although better, isn't ready for critiquing by any soul.

The editing of Hedged In has come to a bit of a stand-still as of late. I have to get it all finished up and rewritten before the month is out, so I'm probably going to end up focusing on that. Maybe I'll submit the first 4k of that novella to the groups in March. I don't think it'll quite be publishable quality, but I'm going to get my free print copy to which I'm entitled. If the critiquing of the edited version goes well enough, and another rewrite puts out something I think is ok, I'll grab a couple of beta readers and e-publish it through Smashwords. If I get $20 out of it, I'll be happy enough.

Julia and I have begun work on Script Frenzy. We've got a basic timetable planned out, and a to-do list that we'll have to chew through. It looks like we'll be going all-out this year, with a tonne of events including another all-nighter. We've given each event its own name (more or less). Hopefully we'll get a good turnout and Script Frenzy can grow like NaNoWriMo did this past year. I've got a pretty good idea of what I'm going to be scripting this year, and I think it'll be a blast!

Anyhow, I'm going to try to break through my wall. Someone told me changing the colour of your "paper" works. We'll see how that goes.

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Wednesday, December 30, 2009

2009 In Review

Here we are, only a day away from the end of the year. It's customary at this time to review everything that's happened over the course of the past 364 days. I was holding out for a little while longer in the hopes that something different might find its way into my inbox before the year was out. Naturally, nothing really arrived, so here we go.

In 2009 I stepped down from my position as manager of The Source so I could focus on my writing, failed to spur interest in Script Frenzy 2009, got engaged to my beautiful fiance Sabrina, successfully ran the Sudbury Hypergraphic Society booth at the Northern Lights Festival, watched the SHS rip itself asunder, felt the formation of the Underground Writers, completed drafts of numerous short stories, submitted work to publishers, received useful critiques on a number of short stories, received several rejection letters from publishers, successfully ran National Novel Writing Month 2009 in the Sudbury area (with more than 50% of those with a word count surpassing the 50k mark), restarted the Monday Night Writing Pack, completed the first draft of two novels, and made the decision that I need to return to college.

Hell of a year eh? So where does that put me at the moment? I've been editing the first draft of my NaNo novel. A good chunk of it has been cut, and I've about as many words of notes for corrections, additions, and changes as I do remaining in the original draft. I need to scramble to get something ready for the first Thursday of 2010 for sudmission to the Underground Writers for ciritiquing. I'm thinking the first 3-5k of my NaNo novel might not be a bad idea.

I'm also starting to work on the planning for Script Frenzy 2010. I don't want a big flop like 2009. I need another successfully planned and executed event prior to my return to college, and I'm hoping that SF'10 will do it. Much like NaNo, I'm thinking write-ins every Monday, rotating locations on alternating weekdays, and two all-day write-ins. I don't think I really want to do an overnighter in April. I'll need some more concrete ideas worked out before I bring it up with anyone, but I think we could have something useful pop out of it, and I know I could use the experience for my future career.

By now I'm sure you're all wondering what I'm talking about. Originally when I was thinking about returning to school, I was looking back at a field that I had given up on previously: computer programming. After having consulted with a fair number of people, all except one having got back to me, it doesn't look like that would be a healthy choice. Generally, the market's too full of programmers, there are thousand of qualified applicants for every posted position, and the jobs are unpredictable.

So I started hunting around for something else that I could possibly look into doing. And I dug, and dug, and dug... It was a painstaking process, and finally I was told that I had to look outside what had become my comfort zone. No sooner had been mentioned than something came to mind. Both last year and this year, when I organized NaNo in the Sudbury Area, plus when I had worked out some write-ins in North Bay a few years back, I absolutely loved it. It was stressful, it was a lot of work, but I loved doing it, and numerous times I wished that I could be paid to do stuff like that. Turns out, you can. A quick little 1-year graduate certificate from college in Event Management, and I could fill the role of Events Coordinator for just about anything (from organizing conventions and fairs, to business get-aways and other learning vacations). Cool huh? I think this is the route for me, and from those I've mentioned it to, they're in agreement (though they hate to see me leave Sudbury to do it).

So we're at the point in the 2009 wrap-up blog where we're supposed to post our resolutions or hopes for the New Year. Let's see.

1. I will finish rewriting and editing my NaNo 2009 novel before the end of March.
2. I will organize and run a successful Script Frenzy 2010.
3. I will apply for the Events Management program, OSAP, and numerous bursaries and scholarships.
4. I will cut up one more credit card.
5. I will get published.

Ok, so #5 is a repeat from last year. I'm going to try for it again. If I keep working at it, it'll eventually work. Wish me luck folks. Happy New Year.

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Tuesday, December 8, 2009

Editing a NaNo Novel

So NaNoWriMo is all finished up. It's been over a week and it's time for things to get swinging again, despite the December rush. I flipped through the NaNo site today and got my code for Createspace. Anyone that managed to complete their 50k words during the month of November gets a code that gives them a free proof copy of their novel from them.

Prior to this year, I never would have really looked at the whole self-publish realm. Basically, it's just like self-aggrandizement. People self-publish their crap just to feel good about themselves. Nothing of real quality comes out of it, and there's no way to take it seriously or make any actual money off of it. Yeah, that's what I used to think. Then I met Randolph Lalonde, the author of the Spinward Fringe series.

Randy has been writing his series for a while, and currently lives off his self-published novels. Most of his writing is available only in e-book format, though you can now order print copies as well. His books are actually really good and addicting, so it's no wonder he's doing well on the self-pub market. Taking a chance and actually reading some self-published stuff has given, in my mind, some legitimacy to the style.

Sure, I still want to see some stuff get published through traditional sources. I plan to submit some queries once I get the first book polished, and have all three books in my Werewolf & Witched Trilogy drafted. So why did I bring up Createspace then? Well, I want that free proof copy. And if after a couple years of shopping around the first novel (which can stand alone if I so choose) no one has picked it up, I can go ahead and put my approval on the Createspace publication and give a go at the self-pub market. Scrounge up an e-book version for Smashwords and Mobipocket, and I'll end up seeing whether I can get some coin back from my efforts.

But more important, the Createspace thing gives me a deadline. Basically, it tells me that I must have my novel fully polished by Mid-May 2010 at the latest. Moving along those lines I did a couple of things today: I formatted things for Createspace submission (5.25" x 8", size 8 font, 3/4" margins), cut the file off at the end of the first book, ran the thing through spellcheck (an hour-long process), and then began editing. I made it through the 26th page. This is going to be painful.

It turns out almost every character other than the MC has the same name in these first 26 pages. People take on other character's speech habits, and there are already inconsistencies of character. I've cut almost half of what was there, and will have to rewrite a good chunk of the other half. This is the chore of a NaNo novel I suppose.

While I'm moving my way through the editing of this novel, I'm going to have to continue to work on the second novel. As I said, I won't be shopping the book around until after I have all three done at least in first draft form. I want to have the first draft of the 2nd book done before February, and the first draft of the 3rd book complete before April so I can focus on Script Frenzy.

Lots to do, little time to do it in. Wish me luck!

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Sunday, December 6, 2009

Post NaNo Recovery

Here it is! Finally, after a lot of work, numerous write-ins and a couple of parties, National Novel Writing Month is complete. It was a hell of a month. And by a hell of a month, I mean a great experience I can only hope to repeat and better in future years. This blog is all about what I've been doing this past month, and how I've gone about creating some good writing habits.

The first piece of advice any author is likely to give anyone hoping to get into writing is this: write every day. NaNoWriMo is all about getting into that habit. For every day of November, the goal is to write at least 1,667 words. By November 30th, you need to be above 50k words in order to call the month a success. In addition to a difficult letter, and numerous e-mails as the Municipal Liaison for the Sudbury area, I wrote 70,195 words. Now that the month is over, you would think that would mean that I'm finished with my NaNo novel. You'd be wrong.

You see, my novel, or rather novels, are not done. The first book of the trilogy is skeletanized, with a first draft outlining a lot of the basic events as they are supposed to happen, and it contains a number of scenes that need to be cut, and holes that need to be filled out. The second book, I'm only about half-way through skeletanizing. The third book I haven't even started yet, and I'm good with not starting it until a few months into 2010.

So, I've a few goals for myself to work through. This month, I need to get through skeletanizing the 2nd book. I started it, I need to walk it through to the ending. I don't need to write at the same pace that I bashed my way through November, but I do need to get a fair number more words done. I'm aiming at about 30,000 more words. I figure once I'm at 50k, I'll have a good skeleton that walks me through the 2nd part of my trilogy.

I also plan to go through my first book, or the first 50k words of NaNo, and start crossing out the scenes I want to cut out. So I'll be getting that thing printed up and I'll do a brief read through. I won't be doing any major revisions, just crossing out and re-outlining the plot. I figure that's something that I can do during my breaks at work, so that's how I plan to take care of it. When I'm home, I have other priorities.

The Monday Night Writing Pack is starting up again. It will once again be an informal thing, and for most of December it looks unlikely that I'll be able to attend. Seems the boss thinks I need to be in on Monday nights for some reason. Not a big deal really, but I'll try to get my butt out to the library as often as I can. I'm promising myself at least two good evenings devoted to writing every week, with a minimum of an hour a day. I did it for all of NaNo, so I can do it some more.

So what are these novels about? The first one focuses on a werewolf taking revenge. The second one focuses on a reckoning of witch covens in Sudbury. The third part I'll have to look at a coming of age story for the young werewolf-child. Not sure if that's quite the route I want to take with the third story, but the second one kind of went into the realm that I originally wanted to take the third book to, and the first novel didn't end quite how I had originally plotted it. Funny how things can change while you're writing.

Basically, I have to say that I'm super impressed with this year's event. Not only were there excellent turn outs at ALL of the events I setup, and not only did I make a tonne of writing friends, and not only did I have fun, but I actually managed to crank out a pretty good skeletal draft of a novel that I'm not so sick of I never want to see it again. Over the next few months, I'm going to be cranking out the remainder of book 2, editing book 1, and maybe even editing book 2. Then, maybe next November, or maybe during Script Frenzy in April, I'll crank out Book 3.

I've got high hopes. Let's see them come to light.

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Friday, November 6, 2009

NaNo Day 6

Welcome back everyone!

Today is Day 6 of National Novel Writing Month . As you all know by now, I'm Sudbury's Municipal Liaison, which means that I had to organize all sorts of stuff for the upcoming month. So far, they've been playing out really well. I've been super impressed with most of my writers this year, with 14 of them above goal so far, and another 13 with at least half of goal. I know a few of the writers under that are likely to shoot up over the course of this weekend, and I look forward to hearing about their successes.

We held our launch party early on October 23rd. It was attended by a nice handful of people, though not quite as many as I had hoped. Ken, Andy, Miriam, Steph, Julia, and Randy made it out to keep me company, as did a few non-writers. It was a good gathering, and most of us already knew each other from last year.

On Nov 1st, the Underground Writers held their own pot-luck kick-off at Sylvie's place. We got off to a good start, with great food and excellent motivation. In attendance were Sylvie, Steph, Randy, Andy and myself. Aura was on her way out, but unfortunately we were wrapping up by the time she was heading our way.

The first official write-in was on the evening of Nov 2nd at the New Sudbury Library. It was an absolutely awesome showing! Mike showed up and said hi, but the people that stuck around and wrote included Heidi, Andrew, Rebecca, Julia, Meghan, Angelique and myself. We pretty much took over a whole corner of the library.

An impromptu write-in occurred in the early morning on Tuesday at the Tim Hortons downtown. I know that Aura and Miriam were in attendance, but I'm not sure who the other person was. I wasn't there, being asleep and getting rested up for the next day's work.

Thursday night was the weekly Underground Writers meeting, and though it was sparsely attended by just Steph, Randy and myself, it was incrediably productive for all of us. Sure it started and ended with the usual chatter, but we all cranked out a fair number of words. Definitely awesome, and I love how the group is doing exactly what it was formed to complete.

For word wars, things have been going pretty well for Sudbury so far. We've pretty well clinched the war against NY Southern Tier, though they do have a chance at catching up. For overall total, I think we've got the win. But for words per person and top 10, they have a chance of turning the tide. It'd be hard and they'd really have to push themselves, but they can do it.

Our word war against North Bay is a little more uncertain. It's only taking the top 10 into account, and I've seen a few of their higher word counts. We've got a lot of work if we're going to pave our way past them and to non-singing safety. On the bright side, they seem to be roadblocking as their average word count has been stalling over the last few days. Their leads may be dipping a bit in enthusiasm.

Tomorrow marks our second official write-in, this time at William's Coffee Pub. From what I'm seeing so far, we have about 7 or 8 people that are likely to show up. Steph will unfortunately be out of town and watching the Senators beat another team in Ottawa, so she'll be missing another write-in. No word on the other members of the UW, but I'm pretty sure most will be able to make it out.

It's been a hell of a pace to keep up. To make things even more fantastic, I have been writing every day. I'm currently sitting at 15,741 words, and average 2,624 words a day. I seem to be getting that in about an hour's worth of writing. Saturday promises a lot more than an hour's worth of writing. I call that sweet. I also call a goal of 5k for tomorrow. I want to end the week at 20k or higher.

This works out pretty good since tomorrow is double your daily day. Tomorrow WriMos are supposed to write double their normal daily average. That means I should try to write 5,248 words tomorrow. Maybe I should stretch for 5,259 so I can end the day at 21k... Decisions, decisions.

Anyhow, I have to go write another ML e-mail. It's been a while and I don't want my flock to think I've abandoned them.

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Saturday, October 17, 2009

NaNo Preparation

Alright, so it's basically been a month since I posted anything here. My apologies. I'd say real life got in the way, but doesn't it always?

Actually, in this case I've been busy preparing for the big event of the year: National Novel Writing Month. For most participants, preparing for NaNoWriMo is a simple matter of coming up with an idea, maybe doing a couple of character sketches and some basic outlining. At the far end, some participants may plan out meals ahead of time, schedule themselves to attend a few events, and chit-chat with people on the forums in preparation for the event.

But me, I can't stop at just that. I'm the Municipal Liaison for the Sudbury region, which means that I'm the one that schedules and books locations for events. I try to organize launch parties, mid-month parties, and the TGIO party. I book write-ins, come up with interesting competitions, raise money for the Office of Letters and Light, and get whatever small prizes and discounts I can manage for my participants. I create booklets with schedules, maps, hints and tricks; I obtain stickers, goody bags, and more. I put up posters, contact newspapers, get on the phone to arts and writing groups, and otherwise drum up interest in the month-long event. So instead of running myself ragged in November writing a novel, I run myself ragged in October and November between planning the events and writing the novel.

This year I have a huge list of thanks to put out. A handful of last year's participants have been really helpful. Steph, Sylvie, and Andy: you three are awesome! Thanks for the help getting things postered and getting events scheduled and booked. I'd also like to send my thanks to a newbie: PiscesMuse, you've been a big help. I look forward to meeting you at the kick-off. From the response that I've seen so far, people have been noticing the posters, which is fantastic.

What we've got planned so far: Kick-off party (Oct 23, Doghouse), Sudbury Writers' Guild Speech (Oct 29, YMCA), New Sudbury Library Write-ins (2, 9, 16, 23, 30), William's Write-in (7), Chapters Write-in (10), Mid-Month Madness (13, Laughing Buddha), Fromagerie Write-in (18, 28), Laurentien University Write-In (21), TGIO (Dec 5, my place). The Underground Writers will also be doing weekly write-ins on Thursdays, and we'll have our own kick-off lunch on Nov 1st. So, if we include the UW stuff, we're looking at 4 parties, 1 speech, 14 write-ins. There are requests for yet more write-ins, but I think I'm going to have to cap it there...

So far, I've managed to finangle 10% discounts during the month of November off most things at The Source in the Southridge Mall for participants, nine 2-GB thumb drives, a $25 A&W gift card, and a signed copy of Spinward Fringe: Origins courtesy of the book's author, Randolph Lalonde. I've also a score of stickers, "hipster PDAs", name tags, and word count calendars. I'm hoping to snag a couple of $10 Tim Hortons gift cards between now and the TGIO party to add to the prize pile.

On top of all this, I've also managed to finish and edit (repeatedly) "Tactical Medics" which I sent out to the Underground Writers for critiquing. I've also pounded out another 1587 words for a short story I'm tentatively calling "Blood & Puppies" even though my fiance hates the title. I have a handful of poems completed and have received a second rejection letter for my pile. Still managing to squeeze everything in there between work, pumpkin carving, and paper mache skulls... But that's another story for another day. ;)

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Sunday, September 13, 2009

Rejections are In

So, the big news. Finally got a response out of Poetry Magazine. It was a nice little rejection letter. So there are now four poems that need to move out to the next possible location. Not quite sure where to send them next, but I think "Arrogance" would kinda work in Aasimov's Science Fiction, "Tinted Mirror" would work well in Necrology, and the other two, "Invisible Eris" and "Two Days", may not quite work anywhere.

Some may take rejection as defeat. I take it as a necessary evil. If things weren't rejected, we'd never be able to get non-serious writers to pursue something else. You gotta have a tough skin to write. That's not a secret. I know that I've had some poetry published in the past, and I know that it's been a while since I wrote poetry with much commitment. I expect to have a lot of places reject my work before anything is accepted. A few successes here and there couldn't hurt any though.

Since I was rejected, I've finished the first draft of a new short story, "Tactical Medics", and am about six drafts through a fresh poem, "Ignorance." The short story, is a bit of a fun slap in the face. I'm pretty excited about the first draft, but I won't be getting too far ahead of myself. I want to give it a couple good thick edits before turning it over to the Underground Writers on October 1st. That'll give me feedback for October 15th, and I can clean it up and maybe submit it somewhere (On Spec ?) for November 1st. I'm saving "Ignorance" for my next set of 4 poems to ship out to Poetry Magazine, which I also hope to be able to do on November 1st.

Speaking of work in progress. The Underground Writers currently has "Bloodspurt" in their hands, and I'm sure they'll be ripping it up good. I've already read through a few of the pieces that I need to have done for Thursday. One of them is absolutely fantastic, the others are pretty good starts of which I hope to read more. When I get "Bloodspurt" back, I'll know how much time I should really be editing that piece. I'm sure its a lot. With a bit of luck, I should be able to send it out for the beginning of October, but that may be optimistic given the piece itself.

Dug up a couple of fantasy pieces I started a couple years ago, and I think with some work, I can finish them and get them sent out somewhere. I'm betting on Tales of the Talisman for one of them, but figure it won't be going out until the new year. With National Novel Writing Month sitting on the horizon, I won't be putting words down on anything but Hedged in November. Still have some time this month I suppose.

Anyhow, enough writing in the form of procrastination. I need to turn my writing to one of my WIPs. Good luck everyone!

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Sunday, July 19, 2009

Word Count & Cheering Squad

Hello once again everyone.

I've been getting a fair bit of writing done over the last little while. Earlier today I cranked out a fresh scene for The Fall of Order. In my first draft, The Fall of Order had been written as a bunch of seemingly unrelated short stories about a necromancer. As I moved into the second draft, I decided that the stories were too unrelated to leave in that form. As a result, I've had a lot of work restaging while I edit.

When I sat down to get to work earlier this afternoon, I discovered that I had arrived at a point where the necessary scene had not been written. I had not written a short story involving the fate of John. As a result, I managed to crank out a pretty tightly written scene that not only revealed his fate, but also took a few steps into the past of the principal villain, revealing a part of her reason for doing what she's doing.

It ended up adding just a little over 1500 words to my novel. I'll be sitting down and editing the next scene sometime over the next hour or so. In its original incarnation, the next scene was written as a part of a writing challenge for the Sudbury Hypergraphic Society. It ran around 768 words. I figure, after editing it and weaving in the larger storyline, it'll probably end up around 1500.

A few other members of the SHS and myself got together last Thursday to figure out a way to keep motivation up for our writing. To push each other to continue to write, and to write more. One of the things we came up with was a word-count blog. As a result, Off-Week Write-Ins was born. Each of us will post our word counts daily, as well as any excuses for not having written, or thoughts about our progress. Generally the posts will be really short (ie: 726 words on The Fall of Order and 120 on "Rifters." Go me!). We also hope to meet on the off-week of the SHS meetings for mini-write-ins, just like we used to have during National Novel Writing Month. This will work much like the Monday Writing Pack that I attend, and have nothing to do with the SHS other than having a couple of same members.

The next Sudbury Hypergraphic Society meeting is this upcoming Friday. We'll probably discuss delaying the book sale until next year, and then move on to our writing or maybe some critiquing. Either way, it should be a good night with another nice word count.

Anyhow, time to get back to my writing. Wish me luck!

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Monday, July 6, 2009

Northern Lights Festival Boreal 2009 - In Review

I'd like to issue a hearty hello to people who are following this for the first time! Welcome to my writing blog. Many of you are probably looking for the Sudbury Hypergraphic Society (SHS) or the Sudbury Writers' Guild (SWG) websites. I've just linked to them for you, just hop on over and grab your updates about their upcoming events.

This past weekend I manned a booth at the Northern Lights Festival Boreal in Sudbury. The weather cooperated for most of the weekend, giving us a comfortable 21 C and some beautiful sunshine. I was at the booth almost all day Saturday and Sunday, only breaking for food and washroom. It was great to see and talk to so many people who share a passion for the arts and the community of Sudbury! I was thrilled to speak about all the great things coming up in the area with so many different people from so many different walks of life.

One theme seemed to be pretty common among the people whom I had opportunity to speak. They were all surprised to discover that Sudbury had a writing group, let alone two! Although the SHS is a newly formed organization, just through its eighth month, the SWG has been in existence since at least the early '90s. So why have so few people heard of these groups? I would claim it to be lack of trying, but considering both the SWG and SHS just obtained their websites recently and neither have attended many local festivals in the past, I have to go with lack of publicity. One would think that to be something to approach the Sudbury Arts Council (SAC) about, but that group has just ended a two-year hiatus and is trying to reform and reorganize after having been left in something of a shamble.

It seems the arts community in Sudbury has been running itself as a series of small, unrelated and for the most part, untalking groups. For a city like Sudbury, the arts is due to push the city into its own renaissance. The hustle and bustle of the industrialized and unionized city is subsiding because of the economic recession, and people are trying to turn their hobbies (jewelcrafting, painting, writing, acting, woodwork, etc) into a secondary income as they're forced to resort to minimum wage jobs. With new groups forming across the city to encourage these endeavours, it is my hope that we can all come together and help rejuvenate the city, becoming an artistic jewel in Northern Ontario. The Northern Lights Festival Boreal showed me that there is a huge interest in the arts in Sudbury. People just find it hard to find out what is going on across the city, and how to get involved in something that is of interest to them.

My main purpose during the festival was to push and introduce people to the SWG, the SHS, National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo), Script Frenzy, and The Ontario Poetry Society (TOPS). All of which are active in the area. Miriam H. Harrison now stands as the current branch head of TOPS, and will be getting something happening on that front starting in the fall when she returns from a fact-finding mission out west. I am the Municipal Liaison for the Sudbury area for NaNoWriMo and Script Frenzy, and successfully lead a group to completing their 50k novels last year. Representing the SWG this weekend we had their incoming president, Scott; the VP Miriam, the webmaster Andy, and members Judy and Ken. For the SHS we had Andy, Ken, Miriam, and myself.

By sharing a booth among members of different literary organizations, I really came to feel that we were doing more together than could ever be done as individual groups. Different people were interested in different aspects of our table, from the casual onlooker who spotted the ancient typewriter (and our free draw), to the writing enthusiast that wanted to know about everything. I think, come September, the SWG will find itself with an influx of fresh blood from many of the people that we spoke with at length about the group. I also fully expect a blossoming of participants in NaNoWriMo this upcoming Novemeber. I look forward to seeing what becomes of all this.

I also look forward to hearing from a lot of people about donations for the SHS' summer book sale. We'll take just about any book you wish to donate, and resell it at the book sale August 22nd, 2009 at the Market Square. The proceeds from the sale are going to be donated to a youth literacy program. If you wish to book a time to drop off the books, contact me.

One thing I know for sure, Sudbury is not a cultural void. Although it may be hard to find the group you're looking for, we're out here. Even more important, we're ready to start working together. The time to rejeuvenate the culture of Sudbury has arrived, and I can hardly wait.

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